CATERING STAFF WANTED Are you free weekends from 20th June to 5th September? We need staff to serve food at events including family celebrations & business dinners. Previous experience desirable but not essential. Apply at: [email protected] Write an email applying for the job (170-200 words).

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing with
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to the advertisement for catering staff I would like to apply for
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just graduated
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that
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is exactly for catering, cooking, and studying as
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waitress . I had very good grades in the three subjects .
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have two certificates for
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B2 in English and Spanish. So if the guests or the client speaks that language
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can help . Over the past two
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I‘ve been working as a waitress and do catering. I am very polite and have the ability to communicate well with the
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and guests, I‘m not clumsy, and I‘m very organized.I find that work enjoyable and my boss was impressed
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my work. I
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consider
myself to be hardworking, reliable and cheerful . I am
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fluent in Spanish and English. I will be
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if you consider my application. I have attached a copy of my CV and
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from my previous employer. I look forward to hearing from you.
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faithfully, Silvia-Alexandra Andreeva
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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