You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. Write a letter to the director of the Museum

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Dear Mr Walker, I am writing to apply for the post of in the City Museum shop during the holidays which was advertised in the "Kyoto Times" on 2 March 2022. I believe that my qualifications, personal character and work experience make me a perfect candidate for

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job. Currently, I am studying at Kyoto City of Art University and will be graduating in 2025. I'm studying subjects that are relevant to the offered post.

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constantly perfect my management skills by taking various additional business courses. During my studies, I have been working part-time at a souvenir shop located near the City Museum

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and improved my leadership skills, communication competencies and ability to work in a team. Since the souvenir shop will be closed during the holiday season, I am keen on finding a working position in summer. I am available for an interview at any time. You can contact me most easily by phone. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I'm looking forward to hearing from you in the nearest future. Yours faithfully, Naomi Honami

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