The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
The pie charts below illustrate the proportions of British
students
at one university in England who were able to speak other languages
in addition
to English
between 2000 and 2010.
In general, in the year 2000, the percentage
of students
speaking languages
other than English
reach 80 per cent
, the category of students
who speak Spanish has the largest portion among the whole categories. In addition
, students
who speak only French and those speaking in other languages
with
15 per Change preposition
apply
cent
. However
, students
who speak two other languages
and those who speak German only has
the same Correct subject-verb agreement
have
percentage
of 10 per cent
which can be regarded as the smallest portion. However
, there is only 20 per cent
of students
speak only English
.
It has a significant change in 2010, the percentage
of students
speaking languages
other than English
increased 10
per Change preposition
by 10
cent
compares to 2000. It shows 35 per cent
of students
speak Spanish which is still the biggest category in 2010. The second
-largest portion is 20 per cent
, in the category of students
who speak other languages
. Furthermore
, the percentage
of students
who speak French only has a 10 per cent
increase between 2000 and 2010.
The group of students
speaking in English
and French decreased, both of them have 10 per cent
only in 2010. Interestingly, students
who speak German only keeps steadily
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steady
with
10 per Change preposition
at
cent
in both 2000 and 2010.Submitted by ru8m6512 on
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