The diagrams below show the costal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagrams below show the costal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The maps below show the changes
of
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the coastal village of Seaville over thirty years from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, more residential buildings are established to the west. Infrastructures and facilities,
such
as one retirement village and a grand hotel, have been added to the east.
Firstly
, the woodland had been removed and upgraded into a golf course in the west part of the village.
Furthermore
, the marsh was drained and developed into permanent houses that could benefit more locals. The hotel
next
to the west of the main road remains. To the northeast, a retirement centre was constructed which made use of the vacant land and a boat club was built close to it. The sand dunes had been cleared and replaced by a hotel. The tea room in 1980 remains the same place but has been reformed into a restaurant nowadays.
Additionally
, holiday cottages that will provide tourists with a good view of the scenery, were developed along the east bank.
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