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Charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The assigned pie charts present the comparison of
water
 consumed by six distinct Nations globally (i.e North
America
 ,South
America
 , Europe,Africa,Central Asia and South East Asia ) for various purposes.The data is calibrated in proportion. Talking about North
America
 , 48% of
water
 is used by industries followed by 39% in agriculture and 13% in the domestic sector. Whereas, in South
America
Add a comma
,America
show examples
 mostly
water
 consumption is seen in agriculture area with 71% and least in homes with 10%.
However
 , in the case of ,Europe 53% of
water
 usage is shown in industrial regions 32% in cultivation and 15% in household activities. While having a look at Africa , 84% of
water
 is used in farming, 9% in manufacturing and 7% in the domiciliary section.
Furthermore
 , 88% of
water
 is supplied in agriculture , 7% in production industries and the remaining 5% in housing zones. Overall, it is noticed that maximum consumption of drink is seen in Central Asia with 88% and minimum application in the domestic area with 5% in the same country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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