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In many developing countries,there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction.What measures could be taken to prevent this?

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In a lot of improving countries nowadays appears an issue with decreasing quality of air and
water
 from both industry and construction. The main reason for
this
 is
increasing
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number
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a number
the number
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 of toxins which are emitted into the atmosphere by various
factories
. The solution for
this
 problem can be recycling all the
waste
materials
 that are being created. The amount of toxins
that
is
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 being emitted in the
water
 and in the air increases year by year. Most
factories
 use deleterious
materials
 because they are cheaper than ecologically clean ones;
however
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this
 causes big harm to the environment.
In addition
,
the
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clean
materials
 are
also
 in short supply. Of course,
factories
 produce a large release of
waste
materials
.
This
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This factory
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factories
 commonly are placed in urban districts near the pounds so the easiest way to get rid of the
waste
 is to throw it
to
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 the pounds.
For instance
, whenever I and my family drive past that kind of
factories
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factory
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, we always see how dirty the
water
 is in these lakes or rivers. The solution that can be made to prevent
the
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pollution is the recycling of
the
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toxic
materials
.
Instead
 of throwing it in the air or in the
water
, the major
factories
 can recycle the
waste
that is
 being produced during the process.
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, -? In conclusion, one of the major problems in recent years is
pollution
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the pollution
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 of our atmosphere.
This
 pollution is caused by many
factories
’
waste
materials
 and can be solved by recycling those
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materials
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material
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materials
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 and making them more environmentally friendly. (254 words)
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution control regulations
  • emissions
  • discharges
  • green technology incentives
  • environmentally friendly practices
  • renewable energy sources
  • sustainable materials
  • waste management policies
  • recycling processes
  • environmental monitoring
  • compliance with environmental standards
  • public awareness campaigns
  • environmental protection
  • infrastructure upgrades
  • modern building techniques
  • international environmental organizations
  • air and water quality management
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