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Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. Do you agree or disagree?

#group #team #activities #skills #life
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Currently, there is a discussion with regard to
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 of the
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 and alone. It is argued that leading teams’
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 could improve personal competencies, even more than individual
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interpersonal intelligence. When people talk about
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activities
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, exists many reasons to believe that it is an exceptional tool to have more opportunities in several areas, not only in job or career,
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 in personal life. Many authors in organizational psychology and social studies affirm that
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activities
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 could increase important abilities
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 as communication with other people, leadership, empathy, sense of belonging, resolution and management conflicts, even could have a huge impact on self-knowledge, stress and self-esteem.
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, Coleman, author of several emotional intelligence books and important research, has discovered that teamwork can significantly improve personal and
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 performance, even rise productivity,
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, he has recommended
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activities
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 when exists difficult in a
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 environment. Another reason why the promotion of
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activities
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 should be recognized is the fact that humans learn vicariously from an early age,
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, a person, even a child can learn by watching others,
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,
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activities
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 give feedback about personal performance and
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 and increase the opportunities to develop better networking and adequate social support.
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, many school teachers are implementing
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activities
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 as projects whit the objective of improving students' personal and
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 learning,
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, students can learn from each other, improve their social relationships with peers, make friends, even they may have more excellent academic results.
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, a person who works or play in a solo activity develops a sense of self-responsibility and time management. But we cannot forget that an individual develops more
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 in
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 and those
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 can be applied in our daily lives. In conclusion,
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activities
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 are a wonderful strategy to develop and improve personal and social
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, not only in organization or jobs but,
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 in personal life, no matter if it is about adult, teen or child,
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, gives an excellent opportunity to learn from others and receive feedback about different topics. Y would strongly suggest teachers increase the
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 of their students.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • communication skills
  • problem-solving
  • collaboration
  • conflict resolution
  • leadership
  • accountability
  • social connections
  • networks
  • adaptability
  • empathy
  • diverse personalities
  • real-world environments
  • team dynamics
  • group cohesion
  • interpersonal skills
  • delegation
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