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when choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration for many. Others, however prefer different others aspects of a job over the salary they earn. in. you opinion what are the most important aspects of a job

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The given line graph depicts the yearly
income
 of three bakeries in Calgary in a decade between 2000 to 2010. Overall, all three bakeries showed a considerable fluctuation in their annual
income
.
However
, both
Amandine
Bakery
 and
Bolo
 Cakery showed an increasing trend in their yearly
income
. Whereas, Marie Bakeshop exhibited a declining trend.
To begin
 with, between 2000 to 2005 Marie Bakeshop had the highest annual revenue in comparison to
Amandine
Bakery
 and
Bolo
 Cakery. The numbers were over 80,000USD between 2000 to 2004 and
then
 steeply falling to just over 60,000USD in the year 2005.
In contrast
,
Bolo
Bakery
 registered
annual
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income
 of 2000USD in the year 2000 and almost doubled to 4000
USD
 in 2003, remaining consistent till 2005 at close to 4000USD.
On the other hand
,
Amandine
Bakery
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Bakery's
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 yearly revenue remained constant from 2000 to 2005 at 50,000USD. From 2005, the annual sales revenue of Marie Bakeshop
further
 declined to 4000
USD
 in the year 2010. ,While
Amandine
Bakery
 showed a dramatic rise in annual sales from 50,000
USD
 to over 100,000USD in 2010, almost doubling. At the same time,
Bolo
 cakery yearly
income
also
 rose steadily from below 40,000USD in 2005 to 60,000USD in 2008 and
finally
 over 60,000USD in 2010.
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