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You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation at this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include: Details about the conference Why do you want your colleague to give the presentation What arrangement you will do for this conference

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Dear Mrs Sinju paul
This
 letter is to inform you that I am hosting a conference on April 18th on behalf of our company and I wish you to give a lecture on that. As I mentioned our
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programme
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 is planning to conduct in
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 auditorium on 18th from 10.00am to 5 .00pm . Its a single day meeting and we expect some VIPs. Since I am organising, I want you to give a
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in
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this
 event about
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 of
microscope
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 in endodontics and I am pretty sure that you are the perfect person to deliver that note as an endodontist. I hope you will not deny my request. In order to make the fellowship a
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success
 ,I planning to make so many arrangements like welcome
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committee
,presidential address ,
repeuted
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repeated
respected
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 speakers of
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concern
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 departments and so on. You can me if you need any special arrangements for the class.
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 and pointer will be provided for you. I am looking forward to a positive response.
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 Yours faithfully Mrs Nibu Issac
Submitted by BINI K ISSAC on

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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