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Band 4

Something in an airport delayed you and you have missed your flight. Write a letter to your airport customer service department. In your letter include: *  what delayed you 
 * how missing the flight effect you  
 *  what you would like the airport to do about this issue

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I am here to notify you that due to the system error in your systems I missed my flight. 

the missing
of
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apply

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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flight cause me the huge loss of flight tickets and I missed the precious moment to be with my family
on
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at

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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brother’s
Correct pronoun usage
my brother’s

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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 wedding. 
As well as it cost me the vacation days that I took from my company for these days and the stuff I bought to have there is of no use now.

 I would like you to solve
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.
types
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type

It seems that types may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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 of issue. As your little negligence affects a lot . I am looking for the full refund of my to and fro ticket beside
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, the purchase I made for it I am attaching the invoices of it. 

I would deeply appreciate
if
Correct pronoun usage
it if

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

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 you accept my request and process it as soon as possible.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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