Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in the one company for their entire careers. Why do you think this is happening? How can companies keep their workers?
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markets are rapidly changed
because of Wrong verb form
changing
employees
career progression. Recently, Change noun form
employees'
employee's
the
most workers are changing their employer annually Correct article usage
apply
however
few of them stay with their company
. I believe that this
is happening because of salary increment and career growth. But if company
provide salary increment religiously and take care of their Add an article
the company
staff
, they may stay with their firm forever.
Firstly
, job
markets are changing rapidly because of financial, poltical
and social reasons. Correct your spelling
political
threfore
many workers leave their Correct your spelling
therefore
company
to get better
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a better
job
offer
from others. Fix the agreement mistake
offers
For instance
, I have recently got good
package from one of Add an article
a good
the good
leading
construction sector Correct article usage
the leading
company
despite I Fix the agreement mistake
companies
accepeted
the offer to join there and will be joined Correct your spelling
accepted
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beginning
begining
of Apr 2022. Correct article usage
the begining
In addition
, if we work same
type of work, it might too boring and does not give Change the article
the same
impact
on our growth, but if we change our Correct article usage
an impact
job
it might differ. I strongly agree that not only money but also
career development so
important to sustain Add a missing verb
is so
this
cometetive
world. Correct your spelling
competitive
Moreover
, Correct your spelling
beginning
begining
of professional life does not prefer to change Correct article usage
the begining
job
in spite of gain
practical knowledge which will help Wrong verb form
gaining
some where
else.
Now, the more companies are providing, the better facilities Join the words
somewhere
to
their Change preposition
for
staff
to continue in their firm. Fix the agreement mistake
Employees
Employee
can provide additional Add an article
An employee
The employee
trainings
to their Change the wording
training
pieces of training
staff
such
as computer training, management course. Moreover
they should be conducted annual gatherings and medical Add a comma
,Moreover
checkup
which will attract the workers. Fix the agreement mistake
checkups
For
example
my wife's Add a comma
,example
company
is providing free transport, free medical services to their whole family and supporting to
her higher studies. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, in order to keep the staff
companies should take extra
step.
In conclusion, in Add an article
an extra
the extra
this
fast world
people do not have the honesty on their employee and the most of them are Add a comma
,world
fousing
on their personal Correct your spelling
focusing
benifits
. Correct your spelling
benefits
However
, few of them are still attach
Change the form of the verb
attached
with
their bosses to Change preposition
to
show case
their honesty.Correct your spelling
showcase
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