Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in the one company for their entire careers. Why do you think this is happening? How can companies keep their workers?

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Job
markets are rapidly
changed
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changing
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because of
employees
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employees'
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career progression. Recently,
the
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most workers are changing their employer annually
however
few of them stay with their
company
. I believe that
this
is happening because of salary increment and career growth. But if
company
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the company
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provide salary increment religiously and take care of their
staff
, they may stay with their firm forever.
Firstly
,
job
markets are changing rapidly because of financial,
poltical
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political
and social reasons.
threfore
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therefore
many workers leave their
company
to get
better
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a better
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job
offer
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offers
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from others.
For instance
, I have recently got
good
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a good
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package from one of
leading
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the leading
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construction sector
company
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companies
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despite I
accepeted
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accepted
the offer to join there and will be joined
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beginning
begining
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of Apr 2022.
In addition
, if we work
same
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the same
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type of work, it might too boring and does not give
impact
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an impact
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on our growth, but if we change our
job
it might differ. I strongly agree that not only money but
also
career development
so
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is so
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important to sustain
this
cometetive
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competitive
world.
Moreover
,
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beginning
begining
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the begining
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of professional life does not prefer to change
job
in spite of
gain
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gaining
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practical knowledge which will help
some where
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else. Now, the more companies are providing, the better facilities
to
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for
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their
staff
to continue in their firm.
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Employees
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Employee
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An employee
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can provide additional
trainings
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training
pieces of training
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to their
staff
such
as computer training, management course.
Moreover
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they should be conducted annual gatherings and medical
checkup
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checkups
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which will attract the workers.
For
example
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my wife's
company
is providing free transport, free medical services to their whole family and supporting
to
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her higher studies.
Therefore
, in order to keep the
staff
companies should take
extra
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an extra
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step. In conclusion, in
this
fast
world
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,world
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people do not have the honesty on their employee and the most of them are
fousing
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focusing
on their personal
benifits
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benefits
.
However
, few of them are still
attach
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attached
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with
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to
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their bosses to
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showcase
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their honesty.
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