Some people think that is it a good thing for senior management to have very high salary compared to other workers of lower positions in the same company.To what extent do you agree?

Homework
is necessary to ensure the
students
are grasping their lessons properly.
However
, many teachers tend to assign tasks to
students
at home
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a daily basis. I believe
this
is necessary to increase the student's cognitive ability and ensure they do not have to be burdened with heavy loads when exams arrive. Our brains thrive and become sharper as we practice. If the
students
do not exercise it continually, the learning is hampered. When they do
homework
daily, it acts as a polishing stone.
For example
, according to a
study
it is observed that when a student allots some of his daily time to studies, he is able
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better results both within his studies and
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activities than his peers who
study
infrequently.
This
is why assigning
homework
regularly is a requirement for increased conscience. I support that some
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activity should be performed daily.
On the other hand
, it is known that facing small challenges are easier than one big challenge. Progressing through the syllabus at a steady pace becomes handy as the disciple can stay relaxed when exams knock at the door. It can be observed from the semester results that the top 30%
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are the ones who
study
and complete the subject-based tasks provided by the teachers each day. As the evaluation time approaches they only need to revise whereas the
students
who skipped
homework
frequently panic looking at the colossal load. Though class toppers can plan their
study
accordingly
, teachers should provide daily
homework
to guide inferior
students
to outstanding results. In conclusion, it can be seen that small amounts of daily
homework
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the learning capabilities of the
students
along with preparing them for examination.
This
is why I endorse the daily assignments provided by the faculties.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Meritocracy
  • Responsibilities
  • Economic Incentive
  • Talent Attraction
  • Disparity
  • Demotivate
  • Undervaluation
  • Productivity
  • Morale
  • Remuneration
  • Equity
  • Resentment
  • Disconnect
  • Profit Sharing
  • Compromise
  • Aligning
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