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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Many humans
work
 for
the
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 similar
organization
 all their life. Others believe that it is better to
work
 for dissimilar organizations. I completely agree with other people, who think that it would be better
,
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 if they
work
 for different organizations. A lot of people
work
 for
the
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organization
 and it is normal.
On the other hand
, working for different organizations- sounds abnormal. In my opinion, all people must be loyal and faithful
for
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 their
for their
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company.
In addition
, I prefer working for one company. In conclusion, I prefer working for one company or similar
organization
, because humans who
work
 in
organization
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an organization
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, must love their job
as a result
, their job will be wonderful.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stability
  • loyalty
  • seniority
  • job satisfaction
  • rapidly changing job market
  • adapt to
  • work culture
  • career progression
  • network
  • diversity of experience
  • adaptability
  • career aspirations
  • dynamic nature
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