Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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all their life. Others believe that it is better to
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for dissimilar organizations. I completely agree with other people, who think that it would be better
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if they
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for different organizations. A lot of people
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and it is normal.
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, working for different organizations- sounds abnormal. In my opinion, all people must be loyal and faithful
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company.
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, I prefer working for one company. In conclusion, I prefer working for one company or similar
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, because humans who
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, must love their job
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, their job will be wonderful.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stability
  • loyalty
  • seniority
  • job satisfaction
  • rapidly changing job market
  • adapt to
  • work culture
  • career progression
  • network
  • diversity of experience
  • adaptability
  • career aspirations
  • dynamic nature
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