You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I have lost my student identification card and I need your help to reissue it. My name is Hardik Vyas and I am a student of 3rd year in the computer engineering branch. Yesterday, I was wearing my card

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my neck but after a break when I entered in

classroom

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the classroom

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, I realised that the ID was not there. I tried to find it everywhere including

canteen

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and library,

however

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I could not find it. As per our college rule, I am not able to enter in computer laboratory without It. I can not afford to skip the practical sessions as we are learning very important lessons.

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denied

to issue

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a book as well.

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, I would kindly request you to issue me a new card as soon as possible. Please let me know when should I come to your office to get the new one. Looking forward to your kind

considerartion

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consideration

and favourable reply. Yours faithfully, Hardik Vyas

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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9 paragraphs

172 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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