You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I have lost my student identification card and I need your help to reissue it. My name is Hardik Vyas and I am a student of 3rd year in the computer engineering branch. Yesterday, I was wearing my card

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my neck but after a break when I entered in

classroom

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the classroom

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, I realised that the ID was not there. I tried to find it everywhere including

canteen

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and library,

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however

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I could not find it. As per our college rule, I am not able to enter in computer laboratory without It. I can not afford to skip the practical sessions as we are learning very important lessons.

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librarian

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denied

to issue

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a book as well.

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, I would kindly request you to issue me a new card as soon as possible. Please let me know when should I come to your office to get the new one. Looking forward to your kind

considerartion

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consideration

and favourable reply. Yours faithfully, Hardik Vyas

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

172 words

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