You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express my deep concern over my missing

credit

card

. I received a package from your bank yesterday, and I was requested to acknowledge the receipt of a

credit

card

along with the package.

However

, to my surprise, as I opened the package the

card

was not present there. I have been quite concerned about

this

event, as a

Credit

Card

is a very sensitive and critical piece of financial instrument for a customer. It carries my personal information like name and date of birth, and in the wrong hands, it can be used to incur financial frauds, causing financial liabilities to me and bringing unwanted stress into my life.

Hence

, I request you to kindly take appropriate steps to prevent any misuse of

this

credit

card

, either by hot-listing or cancelling the

card

Further

, I shall

also

request you to issue a new

credit

card

without any renewal charges, as I believe the current problem has been caused by the negligence of the Bank. Yours Sincerely, Kevin Smith

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

178 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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