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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country's police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

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There are argumentative perspectives over
women
’s positions in a country’s police force or military force. While some hold a strong claim that they should play an equal role as
men
, the opposite makes a statement that females are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Without a shadow of a doubt, there are a number of reasonable reasons
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 that
women
 are not well qualified in a nation’s police offices or armed forces.
In particular
, a multiple of duties
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 supposition demanding physical ability, which
women
 standardly do not meet as
men
.
For example
, when fighting back dangerous perpetrators
such
 as murderers, armed terrorists or smugglers, males will be more powerful in doing martial arts as well as endurance while chasing them.
Therefore
, adult females are not fitting these types of struggles. While
women
’s weakness at muscular strength
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 widely acknowledged, they should be encouraged to play a part in these jobs. In
this
 day and age, issues of military forces are no longer just related to armed problems since
women
 have
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 function to meet the requirements as
men
 if they are educated carefully.
For instance
, in the UK, any police station has a place called Tactical Operation Center which is run by females as their ability to analyse information is still useful in helping to arrest offenders. In conclusion, even though
women
 may be less advantaged than
men
 in terms of physical ability, the distinctive gender advantage they hold enables them to be competent in some fields.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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