Some people believe that the activity of large multinational corporations mostly benefits the economy of developing countries. Other people take the opposite view and feel that these large multinationals are generally harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is a common belief that massive multinational
firms
are generally harmful. However
, there is a more persuasive agurment
that large international Correct your spelling
argument
company
mostly provides benefits in the development of developing country due to the investments of these type of company
are
usually higher than the local Wrong verb form
being
firms
, creates
more yield that a worker can do.
On the one hand, a multinational Wrong verb form
creating
company
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company's
develop
can cause the exclusively in trade of a country. Replace the word
development
Consummers
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Consumers
therefore
will have less choice and an
affordable prices in some exclusive fields of Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
consumming
-process. Correct your spelling
consuming
For instance
, gas and electricity are one of the most important area
in the Change to a plural noun
areas
develop
Replace the word
development
on
every country, Change preposition
of
however
, in Vietnam
only the national corporations can join in Add a comma
,Vietnam
this
kind of fields
. Fix the agreement mistake
field
This
cause a harmful effect in the trading environment and the government will control the prices of gas and electricity, directly
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which directly
makes
people have only one choice when they have a demand on Wrong verb form
making
its
.
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it
Nevertheless
, I support the idea that the progress of large international firms
Change the verb form
is
are mostly provides
Change the verb form
are mostly providing
are mostly provided
beneficial
effect on the Add an article
a beneficial
economy
area because Replace the word
economic
of
the investments of its are usually higher than the domestic companies, Change preposition
apply
creates
more yield Wrong verb form
creating
that
Correct word choice
than
a
individual can do. Investment Change the article
an
Correct your spelling
from
form
foreign countries are usually huge, and these Correct your spelling
from
company
also
create an efficiently working-process
that higher than almost local Correct your spelling
working process
firms
do. According to a reccent
survey, in developing countries, multinational companies create a healthier competitive environment than the local ones. Correct your spelling
recent
Moreover
, its giant investment also
create
a higher yield and income for the Change the verb form
creates
company
and employees.
To sum up, while it is apparent that large international firms
can Correct your spelling
affect
effect
negatively in Correct your spelling
affect
the
society. It is Correct article usage
apply
undenieable
that these companies usually Correct your spelling
undeniable
benefits
the economy of developing countries.Change the verb form
benefit
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