Some people believe that the activity of large multinational corporations mostly benefits the economy of developing countries. Other people take the opposite view and feel that these large multinationals are generally harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is a common belief that massive multinational

firms

are generally harmful.

However

, there is a more persuasive

agurment

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argument

that large international

company

mostly provides benefits in the development of developing country due to the investments of these type of

company

are

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usually higher than the local

firms

,

creates

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creating

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more yield that a worker can do. On the one hand, a multinational

company

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company's

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develop

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development

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can cause the exclusively in trade of a country.

Consummers

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Consumers

therefore

will have less choice and

an

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apply

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affordable prices in some exclusive fields of

consumming

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consuming

-process.

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, gas and electricity are one of the most important

area

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in the

develop

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development

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on

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of

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every country,

however

, in

Vietnam

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only the national corporations can join in

this

kind of

fields

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.

This

cause a harmful effect in the trading environment and the government will control the prices of gas and electricity,

directly

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makes

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people have only one choice when they have a demand on

its

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it

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.

Nevertheless

, I support the idea that the progress of large international

firms

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is

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are mostly provides

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are mostly providing

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beneficial

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a beneficial

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effect on the

economy

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economic

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area because

of

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apply

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the investments of its are usually higher than the domestic companies,

creates

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creating

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more yield

that

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than

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a

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individual can do. Investment

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from

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form

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from

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foreign countries are usually huge, and these

company

also

create an efficiently

working-process

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working process

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that higher than almost local

firms

do. According to a

reccent

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recent

survey, in developing countries, multinational companies create a healthier competitive environment than the local ones.

Moreover

, its giant investment

also

create

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creates

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a higher yield and income for the

company

and employees. To sum up, while it is apparent that large international

firms

can

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affect

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effect

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affect

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negatively in

the

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society. It is

undenieable

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undeniable

that these companies usually

benefits

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benefit

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the economy of developing countries.