Nowadays many job seekers are finding jobs that force them to move for from their family and friends. Is it a positive or a negative trend? What can be done about it?
Recently, long-distance jobs have society's attention even if they have to neglect their loved ones.
Although
this
type of work offers a higher salary, the employer will have to face drawbacks in the mentality.
On one hand, an occupation that requires travelling long routes, and immigration usually offer
a high salary to support the potential workers' new living conditionsCorrect subject-verb agreement
offers
,
and transportation fees. As said, it is a positive opportunity for those seeking a well-paid position as it Remove the comma
apply
too
provides the opportunity Rephrase
also
in travelling
abroad or out of boredom, and learn new things. Change preposition
to travel
For example
, being a professor in Australia is around 10 times paid
more than in Thailand. Not only does it Verb problem
apply
delivers
great income but, it Correct subject-verb agreement
deliver
besides
gives us chances to acquire new knowledge and experiences. Thus
, those who seek this
job kind still eager to be able to raise their family well afterwards.
On the other hand
, it can be negative, as someone may neglect their family and friends to keep consistent with work where
they believe can bring their goals. Correct word choice
that
Therefore
, the workforce should provide a clear timeline to be a part of their well-being both mentally, and physically to let job seekers well justify their work-life balance. For instance
, full-time jobs in the long-distance are evident that workers need to be occupied in the office for years consecutively. Since work
performance is associated with a worker's psychological Correct word choice
Work
being
and interpersonal skills which are likely to decline on a bad day. Correct your spelling
well-being
Hence
, providing a gap time is considered important for the condition, especially for those who emigrate.
In conclusion, because of a better income,
and experience of jobs that Remove the comma
apply
comes
with moving far apart Correct subject-verb agreement
come
attract
job seekers could be both positive and negative. Providing a clear forecast suitably for potential workers is seen as essential to prevent undesired outcomes.Wrong verb form
attracting
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