The diagrams below show the development of a small fishing village and its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort
The two plans illustrate how small coastal villages in Europe grew into large tourist centres between 1974 and 2004.
there was where was a massive rise in the total population of 130,000 in 2004, which used to be 12,000 in 1974. It can be seen that there are several major changes mainly involving the construction of hotels and
roads
infrastructure. There used to be Change the noun form
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vast. woodland in the East that has Correct article usage
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converted
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due to
erecting
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golf Course, Not only were olive plants demolished, but the harbour Change preposition
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also
disappeared, the
harbour was replaced with a beach stretching from west to east.
Another striking change is the number of high-rise hotels Correct word choice
and the
was
built along the coastline on both sides of the original village. Unnecessary verb
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Additionally
, the main road has been built to cope with the increased traffic to
the area and provide easy access to other villages. It is interesting to note that some villages and tourist shops were constructed. the original village had no changes between 1974 and 2004.Change preposition
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