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With fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#pace #life #people #food #meals
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this
mordern
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modern
 world, individuals come home only for sleep, as well as they have no time for cooking.
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, plenty of individuals
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tend
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trend
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tend
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 to have fast
food
 for their daily diet. In my opinion, I firmly believe that eating fast
food
not
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a
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adventage
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advantage
things
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, because it makes illness and high cost.
To begin
 with, people’s health
issue
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issues
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 made by
eaten
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eating
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 too
many
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much
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 fast
food
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foods
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. As countless people have long hours working per day, they can only
eating
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eat
be eating
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 outside, so it
wiil
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will
 impacts their body healthy.
Additionally
, some
of
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restaurant
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the restaurant
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 use awful ingredients to make
food
 which
cause
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causes
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 sickness.
For example
, a
resercher
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researcher
 had an experiment about eating MC for
all day
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all-day
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 meals, including breakfast, lunch and dinner, for a month. For 30 days, he can not eat other foods only MC, and
then
 he became grampy, faty and felt
hungy
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hungry
esily
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easily
, while he only eat it for half
month
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a month
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.
Thus
, eating outside have huge health problems for people.
Moreover
, eating without cooking by ourselves causes huge
cost
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costs
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. Since characters work busy for earning money, while they buy
food
 from outside often, it
maks
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makes
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 large expenditure. For
insteace
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instance
, they earn
mony
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money
 100
doller
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dollar
 per day, but spent 60 doller
for
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on
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 meals, in doing so, they only earn 40
doller
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dollar
.
Therefore
, if we can
making
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make
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 meals by ourselves, it will reduce expenditure, or we will expense great consumption on
food
. To sum up, as we know a great
namber
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number
 of folks, some of them have busy work and
other
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others
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 are lazy to cook;
thus
, they buy fast
food
 from
restaurant
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a restaurant
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 often, impacting their health and causing high cost. So, I argue that the disadvantages
superside
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supersede
 the advantages.
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