you are a student at a university in the UK. you have recently lost your university id card.write to the local police station, giving details of who you are,what happened and ask to record your details so you can apply for a new id card.

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Dear Officer, I write

this

letter to let you know that I am Gigi who is learning at York University for now.I have lost my academy identity

the

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apply

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card and I will be grateful if you can help me with

this

one.

Last

week, I have a study with my friends at the institute's library and after ,that I found out that my id card wasn't with me when I have to use

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it to

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entering

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enter

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the place.It's probably lost when I transfer from my dorm to the library.I have tried to look for it but unfortunately, It can't be found. As above details,Could you please issue the matter for me that I will bring it to make the new one which I have to use it again at

Friday? I am really sorry to

bothering

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bother

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you but I really need your help. Hope you be able to

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be an

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assitant

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assistant

and have a great day. Best Regards, Gigi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

158 words

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