The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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These sequences of pictures illustrate the protection from flooding in the residences in some places. In general, there is a step back
that is
set up to be a barrier at the shore, and there is a long internal ponding for irrigating the heavy water in case of rain and to prevent landslides from the higher level
of the land.
To start with the first picture, there is the stopbank that consists of a freeboard and the base was connected to the internal irrigation with a flood gate and the berm.
From a closer view, it can be seen that the building, it
could protect the 300 mm-free freeboards and the building Correct pronoun usage
apply
was
increased the height Unnecessary verb
apply
level
with 3 stands from the ground level
. Thus
, when the water came to
higher than that Change preposition
apply
level
, it could bear with the raised building. As the illustration shows that water could come to the system of protection in two directions, the first one is the internal runoff and the last
one is from the river or the lower drainage area. It is closed
to the house.Replace the word
close
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