Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects.other people think that,in today's world , subjects like science and technology are more important than history.

A people of inhabitants believe that
history
is one of the most important school subjects , while other people think that,in today's world , subjects like
science
and
technology
are more important than
history
.
Firstly
, there are innumerous student studies in my
country
.but the
first
and foremost predominant knowledge give students about
history
in all
country
so students have undergone skill development .it can be
further
analyzed as the
history
of how
population
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. there is in your
country
.citing towards another book and
practical
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used through given tench students about
history
in school .it can be illustrated
further
as the changes that take place in our
country
can be traced back to the size of our
country
.
Secondly
,there
are
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some
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can be worked upon .the
first
science
and
technology
are
also
important for
history
because
the
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increasing use of
technology
, the
history
of
technology
can be learned faster .to make it more specific
technology
like Robert can be created with other knowledge give the fastest in
country
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the country
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.
however
,
technology
act the
country
can be developed at a fast pace.
Although
,there are innumerable
technology
and
science
supports more to learn
history
.so in my opinion ,
technology
and
science
are more important for
history
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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