People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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trend to use credit cards in market economies nowadays.
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basic
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needs. A modern world
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a lot of opportunities
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.
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money often does not allow to satisfy that needs in case it is expensive. Using credit cards
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to get goods or services in advance and pay
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comfortable schedule.
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new laptop for the student
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will increase his productivity.
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leads to
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increase
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wellbeing
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of the citizens. Buying
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laptop let the
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invest
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developing new products or improvement existed.
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, the main disadvantage is in overusing or uncontrol purchasing the staff by people, which have
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finance
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area. And it could influence negatively
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a whole.
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useless expensive gadget the family could face to
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source of income. The growing frequency of paying by
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can be described by the possibility to allowed get before unavailable staff or services for a person. And, in
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rational consumption, it boosts an economy grows and
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of products.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cashless transactions
  • Financial footprint
  • Interest rates
  • Credit score
  • Consumerism
  • Debt accumulation
  • Expenditure tracking
  • Fraudulent activities
  • Overspending
  • Purchase protection
  • Revolving credit
  • Creditworthiness
  • Impulse buying
  • Secured credit card
  • Unsecured credit card
  • Spending limit
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