Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects.Other people think that,in today's world,subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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ways, though they are some which are relevant depending on the time in which the

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is operating. History is relevant

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because it gives a

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of any subject of

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that will help or give

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of the current situation to the future.

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and

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are as well of great relevance

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dispensation of time we are in. As a matter of

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essay will present views on both subjects. Each and

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has a

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, be it good or bad, which makes it history.

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I mentioned in my introduction that for progress to take place,

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should be known or understood because it will give an understanding of the full circle of the subject.

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an existing company may decide to expand their market into different parts of the

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, they should do a

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check of the existing products, how they

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performed

in the past, how are they doing currently, that

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check will help them to predict the future of the product. I view

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and

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as of equal relevance because they are the feet and the eyes of the current

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, in the sense that they have made our lives easier and manageable.

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is in

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ways, the easier ones accessible to most people are the internet, cellphone computers and the like. As mentioned in the

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paragraph, the company which has done its proper

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use

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for marketing, communication, payments and the like.

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science

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has played a major role

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in the health sector. Many people managed to get health assistance through

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and

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. Many health devices

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invented through

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and

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. In conclusion, I would say both

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,

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and history are of great relevance

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above facts I have presented. They

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hand in

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,

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they are important.