A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice
Dear Julie ,
It’s so nice to receive a letter from you because I’ve been each other .
waiting
it since the day you left me . And , I’m so glad to give a hand about settling in Add the preposition
forwaiting
new
environment.
Add an article
a new
the new
To begin
with , first
impression is Change the article
the first
Correct article usage
a a-must
a-must
, especially, in unfamiliar surroundings . So , you should wear a smile on your face . Correct your spelling
a must
Also
, you don’t forget to listen more and talk less when you don’t know something very well.
Likewise
, you’d better join weekly conversation clubs in order to know about new friends and to
build a good rapport with them . Plus , if you have more free time , I suggest you ought to participate in school sports activities so that you could get along wellFix the infinitive
apply
Change preposition
with
Last
but not least , if I were you , I would exchange social media accounts in order to keep in touch all the time . I suppose ,
it is a good way to know ins and outs of your classmates.
If you need more advice , don’t hesitate to write Remove the comma
apply
me
anytime.
Keep in touch,
Mee MeeChange preposition
to me
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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