Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there is a controversial opinion about academic

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some people consider that

History

is one of the most significant school

subjects

,others believe that we are living in a developing world and for

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subjects

like

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and Technology are more beneficial. Personally,

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believe that there are two sides of a coin that should be carefully discussed. On the one hand,

history

can teach young people about the achievements and the mistakes of the past.

For instance

, it is highly important to know about the strength of our ancestors who fought for the interests of our homeland in wars.

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, through these achievements,

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young adults will be ready and motivated to fight against their daily obstacles in their future lives.

Besides

this

knowledge, via

History

subject, the

students

are able to learn about the failures of the past and not to repeat the same faults in the future.

Thus

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will realise that

history

is our heritage which should be preserved in order to become more conscious citizens.

On the other hand

, both Science, as well as Technology subject,

subjects

are considered to be highly important for an academic curriculum. For the reason that everything around us is constantly evolving, all

students

should be aware of scientistic and technological developments.

In particular

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computer and other inventions in the correct way is a lesson which should be taught to all pupils. By gaining knowledge of these

subjects

,

students

can enrich their cognitive ability, their critical thinking as well as

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overall skills. To sum up, it is an undeniable fact that

History

and Science are two totally different

subjects

which provide a multitude of benefits to

students

.

However

, none of these

subjects

can replace one

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in the school curriculum as they are equally important and significant academic tools.