You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

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Dear Sir, I am Karthi and staying in Eastern Road, London which is a nearby a

tennis

court. I am writing

this

letter to express my interest in an advertisement for your

tennis

program. I was very much interested to play

tennis

. In my school days, I participated and was awarded for achievement in

tennis

. After finishing school I am not able to allocate time to developing my skill in

tennis

. When I saw your advertisement I remember my childhood and feel happy to get a chance to start again. When I saw the course duration it takes almost to complete the entire program. But my university exam begins within six months and

also

I have to go for Induction training in another place. So I will be available for six months. Even though there are some hardships I am very much interested to join the course. Can you please consider my situation and admit to learning the course. If possible, Considering my short duration please refund some part amount which I am going to pay fully at the time of admission. Thanks for your consideration and hope to get a positive from your side. Yours sincerely Karthi

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