Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
There is high wage takes a crucial role
than
Change preposition
in
show examples
job
Use synonyms
satisfaction
Use synonyms
in
Use synonyms
life
Add an article
the life
show examples
of some
people
Use synonyms
. In my opinion, in modern
life
Use synonyms
, it is important to devote your
life
Use synonyms
for
Change preposition
to
show examples
the
Correct article usage
a
show examples
job
Use synonyms
that gives you a sense of
fulfillment
Change the spelling
fulfilment
show examples
.
Nevertheless
Linking Words
, if
people
Use synonyms
concentrate only on making money, neglecting
the
Change the word
their
show examples
interests, their emotional health will be hampered.
First
Linking Words
of all,
the
Change the article
apply
show examples
one of main factors of reaching success in
career
Correct article usage
a career
show examples
is doing that
work
Use synonyms
, which gives you gratification, since that
job
Use synonyms
satisfaction
Use synonyms
should be a priority when choosing
workplace
Add an article
a workplace
show examples
.
For instance
Linking Words
, the worker can complete certain tasks
on
Change preposition
at
show examples
high
Add an article
a high
show examples
level and be promoted in future only if he is keen on working. The recent survey among the graduated students depicts that they will choose
the
Correct article usage
a
show examples
job
Use synonyms
that will be based on their hobbies, so it shows that generation of
this
Linking Words
century
more
Add a missing verb
is more
show examples
conscious and there is more
likelihood
Replace the word
likely
show examples
to get
perspective
Add an article
a perspective
show examples
career.
Secondly
Linking Words
,
people
Use synonyms
spent half of their
life
Use synonyms
at
work
Use synonyms
and it is important to be
emotionally
Change the adverb
emotional
show examples
health since a balance at
work
Use synonyms
is one of the most popular and necessary
trend
Change to a plural noun
trends
show examples
.
For instance
Linking Words
,
people
Use synonyms
can earn a good living thanks to
job
Use synonyms
satisfaction
Use synonyms
,
Linking Words
consequently
Add a comma
,consequently
show examples
the quality of
work
Use synonyms
will increase. Interestingly, American university researchers proved that the extent of happiness partially depends on chosen
specialty
Change the spelling
speciality
show examples
and workplace,
that is
Linking Words
why it is essential to be satisfied with
Use synonyms
job
Correct article usage
a job
show examples
. To sum up,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
job
Use synonyms
satisfaction
Use synonyms
is significantly necessary for each
people
Use synonyms
, because it can increase the extent of happiness and
work
Use synonyms
quality among coworkers.
Nevertheless
Linking Words
,
generation
Correct article usage
the generation
show examples
will be more interested in
chosen
Correct pronoun usage
their chosen
show examples
specialty
Change the spelling
speciality
show examples
and there will be more
likelihood
Replace the word
likely
show examples
in
Change preposition
of
show examples
career
Correct article usage
a career
show examples
perspective.
Submitted by Allazhar on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
What to do next:
Look at other essays: