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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

#salary #job #satisfaction
There is high wage takes a crucial role
than
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job
satisfaction
 in
life
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the life
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 of some
people
. In my opinion, in modern
life
, it is important to devote your
life
for
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the
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a
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job
 that gives you a sense of
fulfillment
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.
Nevertheless
, if
people
 concentrate only on making money, neglecting
the
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 interests, their emotional health will be hampered.
First
 of all,
the
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one of main factors of reaching success in
career
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a career
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 is doing that
work
, which gives you gratification, since that
job
satisfaction
 should be a priority when choosing
workplace
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a workplace
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.
For instance
, the worker can complete certain tasks
on
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at
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high
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a high
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 level and be promoted in future only if he is keen on working. The recent survey among the graduated students depicts that they will choose
the
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job
 that will be based on their hobbies, so it shows that generation of
this
 century
more
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is more
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 conscious and there is more
likelihood
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likely
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 to get
perspective
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a perspective
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 career.
Secondly
,
people
 spent half of their
life
 at
work
 and it is important to be
emotionally
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emotional
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 health since a balance at
work
 is one of the most popular and necessary
trend
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trends
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.
For instance
,
people
 can earn a good living thanks to
job
satisfaction
,
consequently
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,consequently
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 the quality of
work
 will increase. Interestingly, American university researchers proved that the extent of happiness partially depends on chosen
specialty
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speciality
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 and workplace,
that is
 why it is essential to be satisfied with
job
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a job
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. To sum up,
the
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apply
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job
satisfaction
 is significantly necessary for each
people
, because it can increase the extent of happiness and
work
 quality among coworkers.
Nevertheless
,
generation
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 will be more interested in
chosen
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their chosen
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specialty
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speciality
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 and there will be more
likelihood
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likely
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in
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of
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career
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a career
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 perspective.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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