You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about my
last
stay
in
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Holiday Inn which is located in the Atlanta area. I have been a loyal customer for four years so far,
however
, my experience
last
night was unfavourable. Let me
decribe
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describe
my situation briefly. My name is Jay and I was staying in room number 10.
Firstly
,
although
it was freezing cold outside, the heating system was not functioning properly as it was not providing enough heat to warm the room up. Even though I had called the reception to solve my issue, they ignored me.
Secondly
, in order to overcome
this
difficulty, I wore a heavy jacket while I was inside the room, and I went to bed early without finishing my evening routine.
Finally
, I would kindly ask you to fully refund me for
this
negative experience,
otherwise
, I will write a negative review on the Google maps application. I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Best regards, Jay
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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