You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I did not receive my new bank

card

Although

I got a letter from the bank, the envelope was opened and my new

card

was not inside. I am very worried about

this

missing

card

as I do not know who opened my envelope, and I do not even know what consequences could happen

as a result

of missing my new

card

. Even though the missing

card

has not been activated yet, I am still anxious about missing it.

This

is due to the fact that others could have access to my data,

such

card

Correct pronoun usage

my card

show examples

number or even my name which is written on it. I would kindly ask you to take immediate actions to protect my privacy. I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Should you require any more information, do not hesitate to contact me via e-mail. Best regards, Jay Mason

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
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7 paragraphs

157 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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