Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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fossil fuels prices the growth of traffic and pollution would be impeded. The
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following
essay agrees greatly with
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this
assertation would be explained in the following
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paragraph
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Firstly
by increasing the taxes imposed on fossil
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fuels
used by privet
vehicles
, people would be encouraged to commute daily with public
transportation
. To elaborate more, the money which was gained through the taxes could be invested in
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transportation
system
. Henceforth;
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transportation
would become more upgraded, and people would favour
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toward
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their own privet
vehicles
.
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invested largely
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subway
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railway
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with
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their cars since
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focusing on the public
transportation
system
by the money
that is
taken from
petrol
money, the traffic in the streets have been decreased significantly.
Secondly
,
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Government
would be able to spend a budget on more eco-friendly
vehicles
, which are not harmful
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the
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environment
. If the
petrol
cost
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ascended
,
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government
would be able to provide some substantial
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incentives
for car factories to produce more clean cars. One of the most prominent examples of
this
policy is Tesla Motors, which the US
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government
invested billion dollars
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petrol
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budget, so many
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different
types of electric
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vehicles
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producted
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produced
. The engines produced by
this
company are
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equipped
with the most modern technology that functions with renewable energy sources.
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is able to preserve
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, by the rising prices of
petrol
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more eco-
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friendly
engines.
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imposing
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the
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petrol
, as the budget which is gained, could be invested to upgrade
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system
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more eco-friendly motor
vehicles
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Discourage
  • Incentivize
  • Alternative energy
  • Public transportation
  • Lower-income
  • Carpool
  • Ride-sharing
  • Congestion
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrian-friendly
  • Tax incentives
  • Electric and hybrid vehicles
  • Emissions standards
  • Cleaner vehicles
  • Congestion charges
  • Bicycle lanes
  • Sustainable
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