The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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explained that there are 3 types of nutrients that are harmful to the American diet every day if consumed in excess. The comparison between the types of harmful nutrients and the time they are consumed can be shown
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percentage of when these materials are usually consumed. The three charts show the sodium, saturated fat, and sugar content of
breakfast
consumed by Americans. On the sodium
breakfast
chart, it occupies the
third
position with 14%,
while
on the saturated fat and sugar chart is in the
last
position with the same 16%.
However
, when
breakfast
compared
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to the harmful nutrient content at dinner, it has a far fewer number. The difference in the content of sodium, saturated fat, and sugar between
breakfast
and late meals is 29%, 21%, and 7%
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respectively.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words breakfast with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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