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Some people are making new friends by using socializing network websites and internet chat rooms.Some people say that this is a good thing.Others say that people should make new friends by face to face chat. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #friends #network #websites #internet #chat #rooms #face
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The maps illustrate
about
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the changes
of
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 West Park Secondary school
since
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from
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 1950 to 1980 and to 2010 Overall, it is clear that the main road remained in place over the given period of time and It is
also
 apparent that the school was developed and increased in size while areas of the
sports
field
 and playground decreased.
To begin
, there were three rows of houses in 1950 which were converted into
car
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 parking lot and
science
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a science
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block
 in 1980. There was farmland near the houses in 1950 but it was altered into a
sports
field
 in 1980. The
sports
field
 was
then
 being replaced by a bigger area for car parking in 2010.
Furthermore
, the school in 1950 had one large
block
 which later on took an additional
block
 called
science
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block
. After the emergence of the science
block
, there was no place for housing. The playground area remained unchanged from 1950 to 1980 but was reduced in size as the remaining area was used as a
sports
field
 in 2010.
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