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Being able to purchase goods from any places in the planet has made nations around the world become almost identical. Do you think this is a possitive or negative development?

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It is believed that due to globalization, global
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 can now be exported to many countries regardless of distance, and
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 might reduce the uniqueness of nations around the world. In
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 essay, I believe that
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 is a worrying trend because the environment is taking a great toll from the global logistic activities and traditional
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 can be threatened by imported
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. Pollution from the logistic industry might bring a detrimental impact on the environment.
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 is true that a great amount of fossil fuels is used by ships and lorries to facilitate transportation processes.
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, the act of burning them creates emissions released into the atmosphere that cause global warming.
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, international environmentalists have discovered that because many
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 are shipped to western customers from China, our planet is facing an issue of the greenhouse effect from the release of CO2 in
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 activities.
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, countries might face the consequence of losing their unique culture to the invasion of alien
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.
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 to, say local
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 are competing with affordable price
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 from countries that have the advantage of low labour costs.
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, local businesses which usually sell traditional
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 might eventually die out due to
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 fierce competition.
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, in Vietnam, our 4000 years of the traditional silk manufacturing industry is facing a threat of losing the market to Chinese
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 since they are cheaper and come in great varieties. In conclusion, the ability to have
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 to be delivered anywhere in the world creates many problems including emissions from transporting activities and the disappearance of traditional businesses due to heavy price competition.

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