As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

job satisfaction
wellbeing
contribute
meaningful work
work-life balance
career progression
workplace environment
recognition
constructive feedback
compensation
benefits
job security
autonomy
skills match
interests match
variety
challenge
economic conditions
labor market
individual expectations
job role

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