Big salary is much more important that job satisfaction. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People who do not like working in their professions just work to earn more money because of the fact that individuals want to buy whatever they wish. I partly agree with
this
statement and believe that although
some jobs are earned little pay, employees should effort into their favourite jobs.
On the one hand, money is a requirement for everyone to have a good life.everybody wants to both industry on the favourite job and earn more salary but most the humans are doing the job they don't like in many countries. some professions get more funds such
as professional sports players rather than others. for instance
, football players who dream to play football earn more bills than engineers. both of these follow just their own dreams but the impact of social policy does not it allow.
On the other hand
, when everybody takes the same salary , most people choose to make the same jobs. No one chooses hard to learn business like piloting and doctorate and may be open in this
area. but it should not be forgotten that every task is needed. Although
I think that some career gains are unfair, this
system will not be changed.
To sum up, this
subject varies from person to person. they should ask questions themselves that 'i want to prefer a big salary or favourite task.' they should choose what they are happy with.Submitted by ozbekibrahimcan on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite