You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Today family members do not eat meals together. Why does this happen? Is this a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Family
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The family
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used to be a unit that shares common
religious
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, comments, and experiences. Nowadays,
however
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, family members usually do not consume at the same table or same place. In my opinion, I think
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effect brings
negative
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a negative
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impact on not only
family
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on family
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relationships but
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our
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on our
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society.
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of all, since technology
keep
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advancing,
poeple
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people
have lots of entertainment can enjoy when they are dining. Even at
home
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, they can watch TV, use
mobile
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a mobile
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phone
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, and play video games without having
communicaiton
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communication
with their family.
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, the only meal I eat at
home
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is dinner;
however
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, when I am eating dinner, my mom is watching television. At the same
time
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, I can only read novels
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on by
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by
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my
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ipad
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iPad
since my mom still indulges in soap drama.
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, every job has
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a different
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time
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to go
home
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, so it is hard for a family to have
same
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the same
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dinning
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dining
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time
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.
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, my mom usually
return
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returns
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home
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and
eat
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eats
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dinner at 18:00, but I just finish my work at that
time
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.
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, in Taiwan, it is hard to eat at
home
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because not all
of
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apply
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the families have
kitchen
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a kitchen
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at their
home
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.
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, many people choose to eat outside and go
home
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just for a place to sleep.
This
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turns out some problems that some children may feel alone when they are at
home
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. At the same
time
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, they may refuse or miss the care from their parents. In the past, we ate together and share what happened to us
at
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on
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that day and made
a closer bonds
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a closer bond
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during
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the dinning
a dinning
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dinning
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dining
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time
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, whereas our
time
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has been replaced by virtual items. We may never know what happened
on
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to
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our family members and
miis
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miss
the chance to help them. To sum up, the importance of family members eating together can not be over-emphasized. For me, a family is designed to function as a whole and a place for us to release our thought. I think
every one
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everyone
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must find a way to create a balance between work and family
time
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