You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but the Landlord won't return your deposit. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter explain why you are writing ask for the return of your deposit inform the landlord of possible legal action

Dear Sir, The reason I am writing
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letter to you is that I want my deposited amount back because I am no longer associated with your apartment so that my deposit
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back
retured
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returned
as early as possible. As far as concern, about your flat that I have rented on that on a very good stable condition
now
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I want my fixed deposit amount from your side as soon as possible.
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, I would like to say here if you are not going to pay me my money that it may
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serious legal action so kindly do it at your earliest. I look forward to hearing from your side. Your's faithfully, John
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • refundable deposit
  • rental agreement
  • amicably
  • tenancy
  • diligently maintained
  • legal proceedings
  • inspect
  • wear and tear
  • withhold
  • non-compliance
  • promptly
  • documented evidence
  • liability
  • small claims court
  • tenants' rights
  • non-negotiable
  • deadline
  • escalation
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