Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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preserve cultural values and art by donating its facilities.

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knowing the government could invest in some more critical topics

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as environmental problems or educational matters, I believe that local cultures of every country are part of

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heritage and at the same

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art portrays the history of a nation beautifully. So both the governing and private companies have the responsibility to conserve it as they can many benefits for people and history. Without any doubt, these days, society is faced with a wide range of problems affected by climate change and global warming issues, which need capitalizing to decrease

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underlying repercussions.

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, we need to invest more in the educational system as improving the general knowledge of individuals

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mostly children and teenagers should be necessary everywhere, especially in deprived regions.

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, many public schools in the villages of Iran did not have access to the internet for online classes.

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possibility was provided for them by allocating the free charge wireless network by the

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and definitely.

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, one of the precious treasures of every nation is its cultural heritage and it should be preserved for the future.

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importance does not have access without all-around support from the government and private sector. One way

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succeeded in many areas, is

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over some

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complexes for the art and cultural activities. A great example of

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issue is museums, which are situated in governmental buildings. Of course, in

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way, cultural heritage and mores are protected and at the same time, the

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could invest in a lot of international eager visitors. In conclusion,

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knowing that there are many vital topics that should be invested

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the governing, I would say, it is an irrefutable fact that corporation and cooperation between the

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and the private sector

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necessary. In

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way, we will witness our cultural diffusion around the globe. I think it is an undeniable source of income which

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