Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. -How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

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There are some individuals who think that
healthcare
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workers
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, as well as
teachers
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, get paid insufficiently and lesser than others
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as celebrities or CEO of companies whereas other groups of
people
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believe that the payments of
nurses
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,
doctors
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and
teachers
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are reasonable and filmmakers have the right to have a high salary. From my perspective, I absolutely think that all professional
workers
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should get paid adequately according to their jobs.
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of all,
although
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the wages of
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employees, as well as
teachers
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, have been increasing in the majority of the
countries
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,
people
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are still not happy with their pay and complain about it on social networks. I think it depends on how much the living expenses are and which country they live in.
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, if you compare payments of
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,
nurses
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even
teachers
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in the USA with the ones in Mongolia, there is a huge gap and difference in it due to the cost of living as well as the economies of the
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.
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to that,
healthcare
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workers
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in the USA get paid approximately $35 an hour while actors get about
hundreds
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dollars per hour.
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, the hourly wages of
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and
nurses
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in Mongolia are from $5 to $8 which is the average payment whereas celebrities earn roughly $50-$80 per hour.
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, it obviously shows that the income of filmmakers is much higher than other professional
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in both
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.
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, the government of both
countries
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should increase their
healthcare
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worker's as well as
teachers
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' income again in order to prevent
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issues. 
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,
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workers
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and
teachers
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work
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as hard as celebrities or any other famous
people
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. Even though actors and filmmakers are hard-working
people
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and almost everyone agrees with it,
doctors
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and
nurses
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work
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much harder than any of them.
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, if you visit any hospital, you can see how the
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employees
work
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and sacrifice their private life and loved ones in order to save human lives. They do not have
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to rest,
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for themselves, and
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for their families because
time
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is valid for them and they fight each
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to save someone's life. 
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, they deserve to have good quality and amount of salary for their hard
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.  In conclusion, I definitely believe that
healthcare
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workers
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and
teachers
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should get paid adequately as their
work
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is significant in our daily life.

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