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In many countries, people have wider variety of food than can be grown in their local area.as a result, then much of the food people eat today has to come from other regions. Do you think that advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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The shown pie charts represent the proportion of three different categories of nutrients, sodium, saturated fats and excess
sugars
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 in four daily meals which will be fruitless if they are served too much. Overall, the percentage of sodium and saturated fats are so much in dinner, while
sugars
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 are added to the snacks considerably. Notably, the morning meal has had the least amount of all three types of nutrients.
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 with, we see that, in the morning the rate of the serving of each type of ingredient follows a similar pattern with about 14 to 16 per
cent
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.
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, they are between just below 20 per
cent
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 to under a
third
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 for lunch meals. So it seems that there not be eaten too much and in a futile way in breakfast and at noon.
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,
sugars
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 are so exceeded in snacks with about 42 per
cent
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, while people tend to eat fewer other ingredients in
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 meal between 14 to 21 per
cent
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.
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, at night people are eating a great amount of sodium and saturated fats with under a half (43%) and 37% respectively.
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 is just above one out of five for added
sugars
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