Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Currently, when violent action movies and
games
are widely available on TV and
games
, there are some opinions that it is causing bad effects on
society
. While there are some arguments to be made to deny that
violence
on
television
or in
games
affects human
behavior
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. Personally, I believe it will have a bad impact on our
society
. On the one hand,
violence
on
television
and in computer
games
has no significant effect on human
behavior
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.
Dr.
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Christopher Ferguson - a psychologist specializing in violent
behavior
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, through his research, found no evidence that there is a link between playing video
games
and increasing a sense of actual aggression in children.
Moreover
, watching violent programs on
television
or in
games
is not a subjective cause of violent
behavior
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, but mainly due to the living environment.
For example
, children who have to witness domestic
violence
many times will have
aversion
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, fear that others will harm them, and
act
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the act
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of
violence
to protect themselves.
On the other hand
,
violence
on
television
and in computer
games
has a very bad effect on
society
.
First
, violent
games
or programs will cause different pressures on players
such
as
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health, daily activities, time spent with it, communication,
cognitive
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and emotional activities.
Furthermore
, frequent exposure to scenes of
violence
in any situation can make people insensitive to
violence
and individuals may engage in violent acts towards outsiders and outsiders. Especially, when children are exposed early to harmful things
such
as
violence
through
games
or
television
programs, it will affect their personality, psychology,
cognition
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, which can lead to violent
behavior
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towards others. Future. In summary,
violence
on
television
and in computer
games
will have a significant effect on human
behavior
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and adversely affect
society
, despite conflicting opinions.
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  • pivotal
  • desensitize
  • catalyst
  • predisposed
  • harmless outlet
  • distinguish
  • controlled environments
  • empirical research
  • minimal or no direct correlation
  • socio-economic status
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