Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?
Currently, when violent action movies and
games
are widely available on TV and games
, there are some opinions that it is causing bad effects on society
. While there are some arguments to be made to deny that violence
on television
or in games
affects human behavior
. Personally, I believe it will have a bad impact on our Change the spelling
behaviour
society
.
On the one hand, violence
on television
and in computer games
has no significant effect on human behavior
. Change the spelling
behaviour
Dr.
Christopher Ferguson - a psychologist specializing in violent Change the punctuation
Dr
behavior
, through his research, found no evidence that there is a link between playing video Change the spelling
behaviour
games
and increasing a sense of actual aggression in children. Moreover
, watching violent programs on television
or in games
is not a subjective cause of violent behavior
, but mainly due to the living environment. Change the spelling
behaviour
For example
, children who have to witness domestic violence
many times will have aversion
, fear that others will harm them, and Add an article
an aversion
act
of Add an article
the act
an act
violence
to protect themselves.
On the other hand
, violence
on television
and in computer games
has a very bad effect on society
. First
, violent games
or programs will cause different pressures on players such
as:
health, daily activities, time spent with it, communication, Remove the comma
apply
cognitive
and emotional activities. Correct word choice
and cognitive
Furthermore
, frequent exposure to scenes of violence
in any situation can make people insensitive to violence
and individuals may engage in violent acts towards outsiders and outsiders. Especially, when children are exposed early to harmful things such
as violence
through games
or television
programs, it will affect their personality, psychology, cognition
, which can lead to violent Correct word choice
and cognition
behavior
towards others. Future.
In summary, Change the spelling
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violence
on television
and in computer games
will have a significant effect on human behavior
and adversely affect Change the spelling
behaviour
society
, despite conflicting opinions.Submitted by hoangthanhnam.dav on
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