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You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter o Say what the participant liked about the hotel. o Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. o Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am
manager
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the manager
a manager
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 of Kandor Accounting services company that reserved your hotel for
annual
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the annual
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 meeting on 2nd April. I am writing to express some dissatisfaction with your food. In spite of some objections, all the participants were extremely thrilled to see the arrangements and friendly staff.
Also
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supply
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the supply
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 of unlimited drinks and mocktails
had
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kept them really fresh and
fulfill
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 during the discussion.
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, I would like to bring your notice one aspect that, In
this
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 modern era everyone prefers to eat healthy and fresh food but, the fish and chips served us was cold and bit uncooked.
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, your dishes were cracked from
sides
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 which left us in shock.
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, I would suggest you replace your containers with a new and healthy model because of respect to the customer.
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, warmers can be used to keep warm foods from the kitchen to desks. I hope you can settle these matters in future. John

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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