Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter • explain what has happened • describe the bag and its contents • say what you would like them to do about this problem

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to inform a lost item during one of your

flight

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flights

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. The incident

was

Unnecessary verb

apply

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happeneded

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happened

on a plane

goes

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going

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to London. The flight time was 7 PM

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apply

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yesterday. Everything was perfectly

fined

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until I arrived

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the hotel, and I noticed I forgot my bag. To be honest, I remembered the bag was still with me before

depature

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departure

at the airport if I recall it correctly. I believe that the bag was forgotten at the

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overhead

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over head

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overhead

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storage of the cabin. It can easily be seen if someone had already taken

out

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it out

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because it was covered with a blueish cover sheet, which was embossed

pictures

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with pictures

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boss

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the boss

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baby cartoon. My name tag was attached

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the zip beside the luggage, and there are some musical notebooks inside the side pocket if you open it. It was miserable for me as I have to attend the concert without my music notes. I was wondering if you could search the item with the description that I had mentioned above. If you find it, keep it

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a safer place

first

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Then

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, I will make an arrangement to collect it at my earliest convenient time. Please contact

this

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number - 123 456 789 if you have to inform something. Yours faithfully, Tun Naung Win

tunnaungwin11

May 5, 2022

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

218 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Unfortunate incident
Flight details
Distraction
Valuable possessions
Sentimental value
Lost and found procedure
Safe return
Compensation
Assistance
Gratitude
Follow-up

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