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Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter • explain what has happened • describe the bag and its contents • say what you would like them to do about this problem

#week #flight #london #plane #bag #hotel #airline #contents
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to inform a lost item during one of your
flight
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flights
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. The incident
was
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happeneded
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happened
 on a plane
goes
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going
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 to London. The flight time was 7 PM
at
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yesterday. Everything was perfectly
fined
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 until I arrived
to
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at
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 the hotel, and I noticed I forgot my bag. To be honest, I remembered the bag was still with me before
depature
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departure
 at the airport if I recall it correctly. I believe that the bag was forgotten at the
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overhead
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over head
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overhead
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 storage of the cabin. It can easily be seen if someone had already taken
out
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it out
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 because it was covered with a blueish cover sheet, which was embossed
pictures
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with pictures
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 of
boss
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the boss
a boss
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 baby cartoon. My name tag was attached
on
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to
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 the zip beside the luggage, and there are some musical notebooks inside the side pocket if you open it. It was miserable for me as I have to attend the concert without my music notes. I was wondering if you could search the item with the description that I had mentioned above. If you find it, keep it
at
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in
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 a safer place
first
.
Then
, I will make an arrangement to collect it at my earliest convenient time. Please contact
this
 number - 123 456 789 if you have to inform something. Yours faithfully, Tun Naung Win
Submitted by tunnaungwin11 on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unfortunate incident
  • Flight details
  • Distraction
  • Valuable possessions
  • Sentimental value
  • Lost and found procedure
  • Safe return
  • Compensation
  • Assistance
  • Gratitude
  • Follow-up
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