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Some people believe that visitors to other country should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

#people #visitors #country #customs #behaviour #host #differences
Nowadays,
number
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 of
people
who
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travelling
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 around the world is increasing dramatically. Because of that, some
people
 believe that visitors to
other
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another country
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country
 should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host
country
 should welcome cultural differences. In
this
 essay, I will provide my opinion on those two views. On the one hand,
travellers
to
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abroad should obey and comply
such
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with such
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country
's
tradition
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traditions
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 and customs in order to respect cultural differences, religion and values of
people
. Every nation has
an
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 unique distinctive, so
travellers
 should accept them.
On the other hand
,
host
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the host
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country
 should ensure
convenience
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the convenience
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 of foreign guests in order to make
an
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 nice and memorable impression
for
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on
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 them. Wherethrough, travel and tour are becoming one of the powerful factors for economical development.
Therefore
,
government
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the government
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 should focus more on attracting
the
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foreign
travellers
 and prepare an enjoyable and pleasant environment for them. in conclusion, during
this
 period a growing number of
people
 who want to visit and travel to other countries host
country
 and
travellers
 should respect each other. It is mutually beneficial for both of them.
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