You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • explain why you would like the job • give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Start with 'Dear Sir,'
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter regarding a job advertisement of
Change preposition
in
this
month's Australian magazine. First
of all, let me introduce about
my interest in Change preposition
apply
this
job. I am a university student who just passed Correct article usage
the fourth
fourth year
exam recently. Due to today's world's business declination, my parents have Add a hyphen
fourth-year
inablility
to contribute Correct your spelling
inability
my
study frequently. So, I would like to use my summer to gain some cash to help my parents.
As far as I am concerned, you would need only six months Change preposition
to my
excatly
to take care of your child who is six years old. I am Correct your spelling
exactly
confidence
and Replace the word
confident
Add a missing verb
have experiences
experiences
Wrong verb form
experienced
before
how to look after a kid. To be more specific, I have a Change preposition
apply
yonger
brother Correct your spelling
younger
same
age as your boy. Add an article
the same
Therefore
, I am used to deal
with Change the verb form
dealing
Correct your spelling
housekeeping
house keeping
Correct your spelling
housekeeping
works
related to babysitting, like studying together or giving ears to them.
I was wondering if you could give me Fix the agreement mistake
work
this
job because visiting Australia is a thing of
my bucket list.
I believe I could spend my Change preposition
on
relax
time Replace the word
relaxing
benefically
by going around the tourist destinations and exploring the untouched places of Australia. I would be grateful if you give me Correct your spelling
beneficially
beneficial
this
kind opportunity. I look forward to hearing good news from you.
Yours faithfully,
Tun Naung WinSubmitted by tunnaungwin11 on
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
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