In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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To land a
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in a company needs knowledge and skills to carry out the task safely. In the upcoming years, I fully disagree that
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seekers are not required a proper
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for them to be hired
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workers direly needed it. I will explain in the ensuing paragraph why I object
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this
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issue.
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,
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is the backbone of obtaining ideas
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professionals
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to obtain.
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, health workers
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graduate from a four years curriculum to get a degree and pass the national nursing examination.
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significant factor for them to carry out and administer the right dosage of medicine to the correct patient since they learned
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information by context.
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, prior to
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accepted in the aviation industry; a person must adhere to the safety and security of flying an aircraft by
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and studying the fundamentals of
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aeronautics
, they need to comply with the qualification of educational background
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successfully completed and free from alterations.
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, they would be responsible for the safety and rendering
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high quality
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services to the passengers. All individuals must acquire the formal education to perform the
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correctly like my
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who has been working as a seafarer,
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commenced by obtaining a degree in marine
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engineering
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a
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. His main
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description is repairing and maintaining the stability of the ship. Profound knowledge indeed is the major qualification
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every company base the
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mental capacity. In summary, practical skills might help an individual at work but cannot maintain the safety of a
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. Learning by
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could be an aid to have a powerful mindset in facing
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various
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the
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and marine
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that were hired based on their excellent transcript of records.
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