Some people believe that university students should study whatever they like. However, others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that
students
should be permitted to independently select their
course
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. While, one group think different they say, only
science
and
technology
related should be allowed because
this
essay will discuss both of the aforementioned views in the subsequent paragraph.
Initially
,
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majority think like that, regarding course material, should be allowed free opt which they want. It is because
students
will have a range of
subjects
. When they have options they can easily choose their own demand
subjects
.
For example
, if the university would promote a range of
subjects
then
pupils automatically tend to that institute, and it could be good proven for
students
.
Moreover
, In an Australian university
students
can select a wide range of courses and diplomas with their consent.
Therefore
, the coming result will
incredible
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because pupils chose the subject
their
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consent and
then
they work hard.
Secondly
, the proportion of jobs
grown
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up. It is often thought by some people that
science
and
technology related
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technology-related
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subject
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subjects
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significant part of the study. It can probably
true
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because in computer and
science
subjects
those obtain high wages jobs and make their living standard luxury.
In addition
to it, they will have given benefit their community and encourage new society
member
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. To illustrate, In China, after 2008, China's education ministry passed laws in favour of
students
who start studying computers,
science
, and
technology
as compulsory
subjects
from primary school.
Consequently
, it is to be expected that if pupils learn these
subjects
from their primary institute So, they will not face any difficulties in future. In conclusion, choice with freedom
subjects
it will be proven upcoming time and if
students
read
science
and (IT)
technology
subject so that work is
also
great full.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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