With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised to access to the internet in order to meet and chat with their friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with the problem?
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children
children's
also
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supervisions
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supervision
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children
childrens
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hazardous issues. In the following Correct your spelling
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these problems
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boom of Change preposition
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internet
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the internet
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accessibility
accesability
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the accesability
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more
see the world in a different sense. It can be Correct quantifier usage
apply
interms
of gaining Correct your spelling
in terms
knowelege
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knowledge
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no age restrictions who can use internet especially social Change the verb form
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media
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platforms
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.
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platforms
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on
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pandemics
where
forced to give their Replace the word
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children
smart phone
where they can pass their time and stay inside the home has led to some lenience to the teens and Correct your spelling
smartphone
this
has led to disasters Linking Words
sutations
for the family Correct your spelling
situations
such
as making Linking Words
a big online transactions
or providing Correct the article-noun agreement
big online transactions
a big online transaction
creditials
to online and Correct your spelling
credentials
also
connecting with toxic strangers which later had resulted in Linking Words
a
bad behavioural patterns. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
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, all these situations can be Linking Words
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overcome
over
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overcome
come
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buy
emphasising Correct your spelling
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also
restricting the usage of social Linking Words
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platforms
and Use synonyms
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media
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platforms
will gain lots of teenagers in upcoming times but as parents and other household Use synonyms
memebers
should constantly keep in check with the Correct your spelling
members
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child's
childs
doings and if they Change to a genitive case
child's
have
lead to Add the particle
tohave
a dangerous conditions
just making them understand about its effects can lead them to behave and use these Correct the article-noun agreement
dangerous conditions
a dangerous condition
platforms
in a proper manner.Use synonyms
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